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Testing 1, 2, 3 (Completed: 27 Mar 2013)
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Nelson had just finished plowing the back field. His back ached. His legs throbbed and all he could think about was Naomi. Ruffling through the pocket of his flannel shirt, he pulled out a pack our Marlboro Reds. Without thought he pulled on the cellophane wrapper as his eyes darted along the tree line. There was nothing but silence in the air.
As he drew the cigarette up to his lips and inhaled, that's when he noticed it. A slight movement next to the great pine tree in the northeast corner. Silence again.
A monstrous "CRACK" caused him to turn around. That's he glimpsed her then. She was beautifully elusive. He smiled. Took another drag, replacing the pack. Leaning on the edge of the tractor he stood and headed toward the clearing.
As nelson walked over he realized that she was absolutely breath taking. He said hello pretty lady. She quietly whispered hello sir, He said we don’t have to be so formal my name is Nelson what’s yours. She answered while blushing; Naomi; he said what a beautiful name for a beautiful women She held her head down and said thank you. Why are you out and about all by yourself? Well the weather is singing such a lovely song I decided to take a walk while the pie I baked cools. Oh so faith blew you this way is that it; Naomi smiled. Nelson was thrown back at Naomi beauty and Naomi was just as fascinated what Nelson as well. While Nelson talked to Naomi she couldn’t help but to fantasize about them being together, yes she was shy but she knew what type of man she wanted and Nelson was definitely it. So you cook huh? Yes I love to cook, my passion is baking. How about you share that pie? Walk to the Big white house down the road once your finished working. That he did. The End!