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Comment written: 02 Jul 2009 at 23:07:55 Comment made by: alboyd

..shattering on impact and hurtling its occupants inelegantly skyward. haha that's hilarious! well written and welcome back!

Comment written: 21 May 2009 at 22:05:23 Comment made by: alboyd

What's with the MS / Mrs / Miss thing? :) lol

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